Showing posts with label fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fiction. Show all posts

Friday, May 27, 2011

Fiction Friday: House Cat




I smell an open window. Cricket song tells me it’s the living room window. Mr. and Mrs. Human marvel at my ability to silently lunge--so feline--through the vertical blinds and softly land on the window sill. There--a four-point landing, as always!

The Humans call me Guardian because I appear to keep watch out the window all day and into the evening. I sit, stare and smell the day. You can only imagine, unless you are a cat, how my bones ache to follow the scents to their sources. I salivate. A hatchling chirps just outside the window, and I can’t do a damn thing about it. My spine tenses, my teeth chatter, and my skin prickles under my fur. 

Excuse me, that cricket has just crawled in under the door. Black and shiny with spindly yet sturdy legs, he’ll leap behind Mr. Human’s chair once he catches a glimpse of me. But it’ll be too late. We’ll run, jump and weave across the living room carpet, and the Humans will squeal and put their feet up on the coffee table. The cricket and I will dive out of sight behind the couch.

The next time the Humans see the cricket, he’ll be dashing across Mrs. Human’s oak credenza, still agile in spite of the loss of half a leg. Each time we race across the floor, the cricket will be missing another leg segment—maybe an antenna--as I suck pieces of shell from between my teeth. The Humans have never gotten used to this. 

Excuse me. If I don’t hide this leftover leg, Grandma Human will sweep it up and throw it in the trash before I have a chance to snack on it later. Do you have a cat? Take it from Guardian: do not look under your refrigerator. 

Submitted to Fiction Friday 4th Edition on The Domestic Fringe

Friday, April 29, 2011

Enough

Kathy’s brown eyes stung and her stomach clenched. She quietly hung up the kitchen phone. She had always heard that slamming the receiver only made an abusive caller even more abusive. Wasn’t it enough that Dad was in the hospital nearly a hundred miles away? That she and Mom were also caring for Nana and Grandpa 24 hours every day, and that Kathy was in the middle of college midterms? 

Then cleansing, hot tears flowed as Kathy mentally replayed the caustic monologue:

Mom and Kathy had waited all morning to hear the outcome of Daddy’s eye surgery. When the phone finally rang at around noon, Mom answered, and after an apparently friendly exchange said, “Oh, we’re holding up okay. Kathy? Sure, she’s right here.” Something didn’t feel right as Kathy took the phone. “It’s Denise,” Mom explained. Denise was Dad’s daughter from his first marriage.

“Hello?” Kathy said cautiously.  

“Kathy, this is Denise. I‘m addressing this to you because I don’t want to be disrespectful to your mother...” Oh, boy, that didn’t sound good. Kathy’s head felt detached from the rest of her body as Denise pressed on.

“…But since you are my half-sister, I want you to know that I’m totally pissed off with both of you. My father…” In spite of the earthquake in her core, Kathy replaced the receiver as gently as she could. 

Within thirty seconds, she was sitting at her makeshift kitchen-table desk, absently reading term paper notes. In the living room, her petite Nana sat in her overstuffed chair with her hands folded. Grandpa had dozed off in his recliner across from Nana, next to the picture window. In spite of the warm spring breeze, the furnace was running. Grandpa instinctively knew when the indoor temperature dropped below 81 degrees. 

Mom didn’t have to ask about the phone conversation. A few minutes later, another call. They stared at each other – what now – before Mom answered the phone. From several feet away, Kathy recognized Dad’s resonant voice at the other end. The surgery had been delayed, he explained, and by the way Denise couldn’t understand why Kathy had hung up on her. Denise was worried sick about him and felt very hurt. 

That was too much for Mom.

“Whatever is going on, I want it to stop,” Mom said. Surprised silence from the other end. “Denise was very rude, and anyway, you said you’d help me...” Mom’s voice trembled to a halt as she recalled Daddy’s faint promises from fourteen years earlier, when Nana’s dementia, and later Grandpa’s blindness and cancer, ate a hole in the family. 

The next evening, Denise drove Dad home. She stayed in her car as Mom and Kathy helped Dad out of the car. He held his eye patch in place with one hand as he handed Kathy his bag with the other hand.  Without acknowledging anyone else’s presence, Denise stared out the driver side window.

As soon as Denise drove away without a word, Dad stumbled into the house, put his hand to his forehead, and began to cry. Mom wrapped her arms around him. In her room down the hall, Nana quietly sat up in bed, even tinier than the day before, not understanding why her dinner had been interrupted. Grandpa sat next to Nana and patted her hand. 

Kathy stood alone in the darkened hallway, haunted by the image of Denise’s solitary silhouette in the car.  






Written for Red Writing Hood prompt: Write about a fight -- the reasons behind it, the repercussions, etc. Show us. Use descriptions.