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Niiiice!! When God emerges, the masters turn to slaves indeed!Perfectly expressed, Judith!! xoxox
Thanks so much, Kavita! Glad you stopped by :)
Names enslave......indeed...captivating writing.
Love the imagery in this poem. Can just picture God jumping out of a stained glass window, wielding a sword.
This is fantastic I love the imagery!
Names & labels are very deadly. Through God we do have the power to overcome them, and those oppressors/despots etc.. should be on guard. Bowing to the power God possesses. Anyhow that's the way I interpreted your Haiku. I really liked the form, typically a haiku for me simply captures a moment or captures a sentiment. You did both these very well here. Thanks for sharing:)
I LOVE IT
Very powerful I enjoyed this a lot!
I'm so glad you've visited and commented, friends! Means so much! :)
Wonderful writing!I loved it Judith.Margie:)
God is a super power one can never disrespect.bless all.beautiful Haiku.
Thanks, Margie and Jingle, for your generous comments!
Even though I am not generally a fan of poetry, your's is impressive. Beautifull, artfuly done - and so true.
Judith this is really poignant! I enjoyed it thoroughly!
Thanks, Cecilia, Jack, and Old Raven. Your comments brighten my day!
A lot said in a few words. Thought-provoking.
As Victoria said, "A lot said in a few words." Well expressed.
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