Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Words Surge

Three trivial lines,
all significant to me:
words surge and recede.


© Judith C Evans 2012



Written for Poets United Vice/Versa prompt #1: surge/recede, trivial/significant

9 comments:

Peggy said...

I love how concise this is and it flows very smoothly.

S.E. Ingraham said...

nicely done - succinct but to the point and you got all four words in and meaningfully - wow!

Enigmatic Soul said...

Beautiful poem. You did well with the prompt. Keep it up!

booguloo said...

Great Haiku from the prompt.

John Evans said...

Your writing just gets better and better.

catieeliza said...

Surge is the right word! :] xx

John Evans said...

Always well done Judith...I love your small stones and poetry!!!
:)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Wow, terrific and pithy use of the prompt. Love it.

madhumakhi said...

What a word surge! It just doesn't recede. Great use of all the words given in the prompt.