Thanks to the
Rhythmic terrors,
Internal slant rhymes
And piercing metaphors
That bleed through your fingers
And onto the keyboard,
I have learned how to breathe.
You remind me to look up,
Astonished at the infinite blue,
And the sudden cumulus shapes
That silently watch me pray.
© Judith C Evans 2012
6 comments:
This poem is by far Judith, your absolute best!!! It has been a privilege to have been a part of your life and I am delighted you have written this piece. Keep writing because your poetry astonishes me. Stay Creative and be blessed.
... and thank YOU, John, for your inspiration and encouragement! I do plan to "stay creative" :)
I love this poem! So much can be learned from looking to the clouds when we pray!
Thanks,Kim! Your comments always mean a lot to me!
This is absolutely wonderful! Very inspirational - keep it up!
Love this!
So beautiful!
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