Monday, December 24, 2012

What I Have Learned

Thanks to the
Rhythmic terrors,
Internal slant rhymes
And piercing metaphors
That bleed through your fingers
And onto the keyboard,
I have learned how to breathe.

You remind me to look up,
Astonished at the infinite blue,
And the sudden cumulus shapes
That silently watch me pray.

© Judith C Evans 2012


Anonymous said...

This poem is by far Judith, your absolute best!!! It has been a privilege to have been a part of your life and I am delighted you have written this piece. Keep writing because your poetry astonishes me. Stay Creative and be blessed.

Judith C Evans said...

... and thank YOU, John, for your inspiration and encouragement! I do plan to "stay creative" :)

kim vallen said...

I love this poem! So much can be learned from looking to the clouds when we pray!

Judith C Evans said...

Thanks,Kim! Your comments always mean a lot to me!

Redefining Sanity said...

This is absolutely wonderful! Very inspirational - keep it up!

Margie said...

Love this!
So beautiful!